Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Pure joy...

Mama's Losin' It

WRITER'S WORKSHOP PROMPT:

Write a Haiku that describes what you love about an ordinary day (typically a Haiku is supposed to be about nature, but this is what I love most about an ordinary day so here we go).


waylon and me

His day begins mine
In the shadow of my boy
My senses renewed

16 comments:

Farmers Wife said...

I really love both the writing and the photo....short and sweet and beautiful...

Untypically Jia said...

That is so pretty! And what an adorable picture!

Wendy said...

I love it!
Dropping in from Mama Kat's!

JadeLD said...

Aww this is a sweet haiku/senryu, I'm a huge haiku fan, I love that it's so quick to do but you can say so much with just a few lines.
Jade

Jenny said...

sweet!

parentingBYdummies said...

Oooh! That was good. I'm a huge avoider of non-rhyming poetry, but I liked that. Maybe I should give haiku another chance?!

♥ Kathy said...

Oh very nice!

June Freaking Cleaver said...

Great photo - how can you ever deny that boy anything, look at those eyes!

Stu Pidasso said...

I agree....what is ore natural than the renewal of life through children. Nice photo and haiku!

Cheers!

Amanda said...

Cute haiku :)

Susan @ SONshine said...

Boy-fully and bare words beautiful giving the feeling of bottom-less love and joy ;)

Christie from Mommy Drinks Because You Cry said...

I love the look on your face in the photo. It makes your poem!

MommaPebz said...

aww I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

I'm NOT a VOLCANO! said...

I love the haiku and your boy is so handsome! I'd love for you to come see my haikus too! Stopping by from Mamakats.

Jessica said...

Are you saying he's your alarm clock? ;) Mine are. I'm a night owl and would sleep till noon if I could...

Email me, I have an idea!! jessbens at gmail

dusty earth mother said...

that was one of the best haikus i've read in this week's workshop. lovely.